Part Three – Feedback and Reflections

You have responded very well to feedback and implemented learning
from a variety of external sources.

I feel I’m learning a lot, the feedback has been spot on and helped me to see things with fresh eyes.

• You could expand on your comments a bit more

This sometimes is my short coming with my learning at the moment, I do not always find the best way to say things and express my thoughts.
Having same issues with Creative book designs, making some thoughts clear and expanding upon my research. This is something I’m working, one of the ways I’ve started this is talking to other students in a creative manner (so I get used to talking) and working on expressing myself via written word better.

– it is so good that you are putting yourself ‘out there’ – I think you
have made some big steps with this project. I think you are right – the Covid restrictions have
actually made you think more creatively. Your observations are very valid. Well done.

This seem to be a theme, I’ve started to put myself out there more and this has all been steps towards something bigger.
Things happen for a reason, maybe I was meant to do this unit in a way I never thought before, not visually, but emotionally.

watch out for typos – you spotted breathe but fresh needs correcting too.
• could you use your own photo for the mock-up sign for extra authenticity?
• you could consider your poster a set of three. What other imagery could you use?

My human spell checker failed, I should have double checked in photoshop as well. – this will be fixed.
The other ideas are being put in place – update to be added to my learning log soon.